Monday, October 10, 2005

Being ruthless

I'm still hard at work on the undercover cop story for WCP's Torrid Teasers. It was some way over their preferred word count so I started butchering some of the unnecessary verbiage, plus one or two scenes with minor characters that didn't really add to the story. And I'm amazed just how much I've managed to hack off it - about 4,000 words at the last count! That puts it well under the target size, and even gives me some extra words to play around with if I want. Which I may well do. The sex scenes are a bit lacking and for a 'Torrid' line, probably not hot enough so I'll see what I can do to spice them up a bit. :)

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